16 EXT. GRAVEYARD - DAY

First Degree ©1996/97
Shooting Script
Revised Dec. 1, 1997

16     EXT. GRAVEYARD - DAY                                         16
         
       The Langmaid family and a large number of citizens stand 
       around Josie's grave as the reverend begins his sermon. Many 
       in attendance are visibly upset and saddened.
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN
                     (gentle voice, holding Bible)
                 We are all gathered here today under 
                 God's watching eyes, in untimely sorrow, 
                 after the tragic murder of Josie A. 
                 Langmaid. 
                     (pausing to gather his 
                      thoughts)
                 Josie A. Langmaid… loved by all and known 
                 as a respectable young lady, yielded up 
                 her young Christian life at the verge of 
                 adulthood. Josie would have been 18 years 
                 of age on the 7th of November next… but 
                 instead, Death lies on her like an 
                 untimely frost upon the sweetest flower 
                 in all the field.
         
       The citizens listen in silence as Mrs. Langmaid closes her 
       eyes tightly in pain. Mr. Langmaid tries to comfort her in 
       his arms.
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN (cont'd)
                 We have got to ask ourselves whether this 
                 act of lust, murder, and mutilation is, 
                 after all, exceptional;
                     (raises voice, very powerful)
                 and if it is not, than to what baleful 
                 influence, to what public sin of 
                 commission or omission, is it to be 
                 ascribed? Who, or what is Responsible?
                     (talking directly to the 
                      assembled funeral attendants)
                 Is it because we are too lenient toward 
                 criminals, or because we are too severe? 
                 Is it because the laws are too loosely 
                 observed, or because they are too 
                 strictly enforced. Is it because we have 
                 taught humanitarianism and forgiveness, 
                 rather than the doctrine that God is just 
                 and that transgression must and will be 
                 punishéd?
         
       A pan of the assembled mourners shows the grief written on 
       all faces and the fear in many of the women present. A close 
       up of Waldo is a stylistic exclamation point as the Reverend 
       emphasizes the word "punishéd
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN (cont'd)
                 Is it an outcome of the late civil war,
                 and a result of indifference to human 
                 suffering which wars always engender?
         
       OFFICER HILDRETH quietly JOINS the gathering, standing toward 
       the back. He appears to have something of importance 
       occupying his mind and though respectful, he demonstrates a 
       slight inpatients towards the ceremony.
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN (cont'd)
                 Or, is it due to the prominence given to 
                 criminal affairs and to noted criminals 
                 by the sensational press of the country, 
                 making heroes out of criminals, and 
                 giving them a notoriety deeply 
                 fascinating to a certain class of minds.
         
       Many of the assembled women are showing outward expressions 
       of fear and sorrow.
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN (cont'd)
                 How much of it, indeed, is due to the 
                 looseness which the marriage relation, 
                 and family ties generally, are coming to 
                 be regarded even in what is called good 
                 society.
         
       OFFICER HILDRETH quietly and discretely looks at his POCKET 
       WATCH and appears to be even more impatient.
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN (cont'd)
                 We as a community must further the ends 
                 of justice. 
         
       In pain, Mrs. Langmaid squeezes her husband's hand as a 
       lonely, gentle tear trembles slowly down her pale white 
       cheek. Mr. Langmaid does his best to keep himself together as 
       he comforts his wife. Officer Hildreth, impatiently, 
       continues to wait behind the crowd. Many women are crying 
       into their handkerchiefs.
         
       The Reverend pauses and continues with all eyes upon him.
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN (cont'd)
                 We all pray that the innocent soul of 
                 Josie A. Langmaid may ascend to Heaven 
                 above, and be kept in the blesséd arms of 
                 God… a rose in the most precious of all 
                 gardens.
         
       A small choir of girls from Pembroke Academy prepare 
       themselves to sing.
         
                           REV. T. H. GOODWIN (cont'd)
                 In remembrance of Josie A. Langmaid, may 
                 this moment of peace rise with her soul 
                 to Heaven in the Highest
         
       The CHOIR SINGS "Amazing Grace." 
         
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